What do you think of this rap verse i wrote?

i wake up early
tryna enlighten myself become worldly
stand tall and sturdy
travel around with me
start in north america land of the free
breathe the fresh air like its 1933
travel around until i hit jamaica
smoke tree all day become an illiminata
lose negativity dont be a hata
playa
now on my way over the atlantic
to europe leave the beach and the hammock
im frantic in the plain
cant wait see land thinkin in vein
hit up amsterdam from paris by train
now i gotta rearrange
my plans cuz i stayed to long in amsterdam
but ima fan now travelin to ireland
land of my fam. ily
drink a litle beer now mentally incapable of sittin quietly
got me buzz happy
strangely
and consequently
wake up with a hangover
now on my way back over the sea
to italy
where the beautiful ladies got me dreamin about the possibilities
tho equivocaly because its unlikely
but then its strikes me lightly
yet with force
im never gonna get nowhere bein unsure

Answer on What do you think of this rap verse i wrote?

1933, the time of the Great Depression in North America and the freedom to output as much air pollution as you wanted.

Mmmmmm thats good air

I'd change that if your going to say "fresh air"

I need someone to crunch some numbers for me?

Okay there is a trip to italy my school is planning for nest year's spring break. it costs $2314 and i currently have no job and have no money saved up but my parents would give me like 200 bucks to help out. In 12 months, how much money should I earn each month to make enough to be able to pay and go? I mean like monthly how should I get

PS I KNOW I AM DUMB AND IT'S TRUE. I'M IN A BIG HURRY TOO

Answer on I need someone to crunch some numbers for me?

$200 a month is your goal so you can have a little spending money while there

What do you think about Italy?

What do you think about Italy?
And about Italians?

Answer on What do you think about Italy?

AHHH.... I loved it i went to Europe last year and out of Paris and Barcelona Italy was my favorite!!! We went to a small town called la spezia and Rome. Check out la spezia it was amazing. The people were soooo friendly and the food is to die for. In fact i could move to Italy anytime! The only thing i didn't care for were the trains. We did most of our traveling at night so we wouldn't spend so much on hostiles or hotels and the couchettes were a little cramped and stinky. But it really is the best way to go. I love it!!!! Really check out la spezia it was wonderfull. Lots of hiking swimming shopping eating conoeing.